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דן פרידמן
/ Un Film Silent

Un Film Silent

...............

scenes : exposition, dressing up, crowded street, climax,
capitalism at it's peak, happy(?) end
.................


scene #1 - exposition

camera far behind boy. boy has brown hair, normal body. boy
sitting on bench. camera zooming in closer and closer
towards boy. camera turns around boy. boy's face is
semi-blurred. face pattern indistinguishable.


boy's eyes wander about. people approach bench. camera zooms
out a bit. boy closes his eyes, makes movement with lips.
subtitle : "i'm not here".


one minute scene of people passing boy. looking at him and
not stopping. "i'm not here" flashing at 5 seconds
interval.


after 1 minute boy opens eyes. his face becomes unblurred
simultaneously. camera zooms into boy's face. boy seems
frightened, looks around, and suddenly a smile, eyes
twinkling in a childish way, giving away boy's thoughts
about his upcoming prank.




..............................................

scene #2 : dressing up

camera on ceiling of dressing room in a child costume
store.


boy enters room with black costume in hand. boy puts on the
black leather body suit. boy smiles at himself in mirror.


boy puts on black mask. the face of the mask is that of a
crow. feathery on top, and a big black beak. the face is
twice the one of a normal man's face. boy looks in mirror.
boy smiling.


subtitle : "ain't i the sexy one".




.........................................

scene # 3 : crowded street.

camera besides boy, flashing once a minute for a few seconds
into boy's eyes. (from his point of view)


boy walking around a crowded street in black crow costume.
people staring at him strangely, but not caring too much.


boy jumps up and down, waving his head all about, making lip
movements. subtitle " KRAAA KRAA". boy lies on pavement.
people watching their step as to not step on his head.


boy gets up, walks around touching different people on their
head and whispering into their ears something. subtitle: "i
love you". people keep on walking in their daily routine,
not stopping for more than half a second to stare
quizzically at boy.




.............................................

scene #4 - climax

camera in local super market, aimed at the russian lady
cashier working there.


boy-in-costume enters: subtitle : "HI" (joyfully)


cashier : subtitle :"oh yeah, hello" (offhandedly)


boy walks around for a few minutes, until store is empty of
people. then he walks towards the cashier. cashier moves
lips. subtitle : "can i help you, sir?"


boy doesn't stop, slowly taking out of his pocket a small
kitchen knife. cashier makes a frightened look, freezing.
boy stabs cashier in arm. blood spilling out (ketchup).
subtitle : "AHHHHHHHHHH".


camera all the time besides the both of them, filming their
profile.


crow-kid works cold bloodedly and fastly, swiftly slashing
her throat. cashier mumbles (subtitle) "help... help....."
faintly.


the stabbing goes on, blood (ketchup) squirting unto the
black crow costume, staining it with dark red blood. veins
hanging out of cashier's throat, some even totally ripped
apart (small ropes), bits of skin lying on floor. face is
totally cut up.


camera films all this uncensored and in one shot. scene ends
with it getting slowly sprayed with blood.




...............................................

scene #5 : "capatalism at it's peak!!!"

still in supermarket. blooded cashier body still half
sitting half laying on the chair next to the cash machine.
boy still in costume, numerous dark red blood marks, blood
smeared all over his beak.


crow-boy leaves body and rolls the door sign to "closed".
boy walks around store, picking up thing from the shelves,
and throwing them about. crow-boy jumping and waving hands
in air from time to time. the store is a mess: bits of
apples and spaghetti boxes and cream cheese containers and 3
% skimmed milk and deoderants lying on the floor.


crow-boy finds a peace of paper and a big bright yellow
marker. crow-boy writes in capital letters : "ONLY TODAY ALL
PRODUCTS IN STORE FOR ONLY 2 ISRAELI SHEKELS".


crow-boy rolls door-sign to "open", and hangs the written
paper right besides it. crow-boy sits on dead cashier's
lap.


customers immediately flock to the store. movie in fast
foward. every second 10 new customers enter the store and
mumble (subtitle) "hello". they pick up things from the
floor as they please, then go to crow-boy (sitting on dead
body's lap) next to cash machine, and take out a few coins
and toss them to crow-boy.


normal speed. (end of fast forward)


one customer, aged around 70 tosses a few coins after taking
a bottle of coca cola, stops before leaving the store. he
stares half amused and half worried at the body underneath
the boy in the crow suit, and says (subtitles):


man : "what happened to HER??".


crow boy : "she's got the darndest case of the flew....".


man : "oh that's too bad. yeah it isn't even winter and
already people getting the flue. did you know that the flue
kills everyday more people than cancer?"


crow boy : "no".


man : "well now you know. you should be in school learning
stuff like that instead of working at this old
supermarket".


crow boy : "i don't think so".


man : "oh well. good day to you".


crow boy : "GOOD DAY". waves hand with enthusiasm.


man leaves store. scene ends.




................................................

scene #6 : happy(?) end

scene taking place in crow boy's house. camera moving
alongside boy.


crow boy enters house. boys takes off crow hat, revealing a
tired sweaty face.


boy moves lips (subtitle): "wilma, i'm home!!!"


no answer.


boy takes down all costume, wiping his sweat with his hand.
boy enters shower, boy watches tv, boy brushes teeth, boy
goes to bed.


lying in bed. lips moving. "all in all it was a good day".
boy laughes for a few seconds.


half naked boy slips under the blanket. abrupt movements can
be seen under blanket, right about where boy's crotch is.


camera zooms in onto boy's face. few minutes goes by, boy
orgasms. boy's green eyes slowly shutting, while picture
simultaneously darkens, until becoming totally black.


the end.







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