קטע שכתבתי, איכשהו יצא שהלחנתי, סתם טיוטה ראשונית
ומונוטונית..
אשמח לחוות דעת..


הקטע המלא:

Drifting away with a bottle in my hand,
All the rest is behind closed doors in my head.
Sip and inhale, sip and inhale,
Will I survive this gale?
Sinking in silence, will not come up for air
Guess it's the only way.
Wandering in the dark, yeah, I know the sun is up..
But this is my very own bubble, so please don't bother..
Stop wondering why,
I'm so sick and tired of faking a smile.
Sinking in silence, sinking in pain
Sinking in silence, will not come up for air
Sinking in silence, Don't have much to say
Cause I'm sinking in silence,  will not come up for air.


גיטרה + באס - אני
תופים - ערכתי בFruity loops
שירה - אני