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The end
I was standing there the gun fell out of my hand it was
still smoking when it hit the ground, I couldn't believe it,
Tonya was leaning against the wall in the side of the room
she was wearing a white shirt and yellow pants -
yellow was her favorite color as long as I can remember our
time together, She always had something yellow one her like
a per pants, a shirt, a hat, a bracelet any other piece of
clothing, one of them was always yellow.
- her head was tilted forward their was a small black hole
in her forehead and drops of blood in her golden hair, I
always thought that her hair was very beautiful, I
remembered how I loved to play with her hair.
Kevin was there too he was lying on the floor in his
favorite lucky suit, I assume it was his favorite because he
always said that his lucky suit, Avery time he had an
important meeting he were that suit, I guess it wasn't that
much of a lucky suit after all, Because there was a big hole
in his chest and blood came out of it.
They were dead both of them I couldn't believe it, My best
friend and my future wife.
The police sirens were close to the house they will be her
any minute, One of the neighbor must have heard the gun
shots and called the police, But i didn't care any more the
police wasn't important nothing was important the only
person that was important to me in my life was dead.
I turned around to get out of the house I couldn't stand
being there any more, Then I suddenly heard the sound of a
guns safety being removed, It was Kevin and he wasn't dead,
Not yet at least and he was aiming a gun at me.
I knew what he is going to do but I didn't move, I didn't
knew if it was because I couldn't move or I didn't want to
move, The only thing that I did knew is that I am going to
die.
You know when people some time say you see your entire life
flashing in front of you before you die, Well the were half
right I didn't see my life flashing in front of me, I only
saw the last two years of my life.

The deal
Kevin and I were sitting in our meeting room with the
representatives of  "Golden Chocolate" one of the biggest
chocolate factories in the country, Kevin was wearing a new
suit that he purchased specially for this meeting (This suit
became his lucky suit later).
Me and Kevin started our personal advertising company a year
and a half ago.
We were a new company and we were very lucky that "Golden
Chocolate" wanted as to make the advertising campaign for
them, Their last advertising company field to deliver what
"Golden Chocolate" wanted to deliver to Their buyers, So
they came to as.
It was our first big contract and the future looked
brightening.

The meeting
We were sitting I a bar, me and Kevin we went to celebrate
the closing of the deal whit "Golden Chocolate".
Kevin noticed that I'm checking out some girl at the bar and
he said to me;
You know, if you keep staring at her like this yore eyes
will eventually will fall out, go talk to her its a night
for celebration.
No forget it she won't be interested  in me any anyway.
Ok if yow don't go i will.
Kevin walk up to her and told her something and I noticed
she is coming over to me, she was wearing black jeans and a
yellow shirt, Kevin gave me the thumbs up, Kevin was all
ways more successful with the opposite sex then me.
So your friend tells me you have a proposition for me.
Yes a one time life chance to get a drink of your choice on
me.
So what the catch.
The catch is that you have to go to dinner with me tomorrow
night.

The question
It was a weak after Kevin married Christine, I took Tonya to
a look out in the desert, I loved the desert I never could
bear seeing to much green, We were standing there looking at
the sun set and then I simple asked her; will you marry me?

I don't think she was expecting that, her mouth dropped down
and she stood there watching at me like I was a ghost, yes
or no, today or tomorrow?, her mouth finally closed and she
pot on a smile.

The breakdown
Our last campaign was a failure, "Golden Chocolate" left as,
And all the smaller company left as well, There was nothing
we could do so we took the money and split it 50/50 and each
of as went his own way.

3 days before
Some one was knocking at the door, I opened it and there was
Kevin in his favorite lucky suit but he didn't look so
good.
I haven't seen Kevin for six months, not sens the day each
of as took his share and walked away.
Kevin hay what brings you here.
Look I know it's been a long time sans we talked...
6 months actually but who's counting I said
Look can you lone me some money.
What happened to all the money you took when we closed the
company?
Christine and I got divorced and she took half of the money
in the divorce, The rest I sent or lost call it how you
want, but I need at least 15000 $.
What I can give you that much money.
I will pay you bake as soon as I can, I promise.
No Kevin, I'm sorry but I can't lone you the money.
Kevin turned around and went away.
Me and Kevin were best friend sense grade school, But I
always was better then him at almost everything from school
to sports and I always helped him wen I could, When we were
enlisted to the military we served together, I climb the
ranks I was a major after 5 years in the military and Kevin
was a sergeant after 3 years, After the serves Kevin started
to learn advertising and I started to learn business, When
we both eventually graduated we started our own advertising
company he took care of the advertising and I took care of
the money .But Kevin was almost broke and we started the
company on my money mostly but we still were partners
50/50.
And know when I think about it, It was Kevin fault we lost
the company.

The least minutes of my life
I cam home I noticed the door was open, Tonya should still
be at work and no one should be home at this hoer, I drew
out my gun (we live in dangers times and in a dangers
country protection never hurts) I advanced towards the door,
And there I could see her leaning against the wall whit
drops of blood in her hair and I simply couldn't holed back
I got in and I shot the only other standing person in the
room, After the shot I noticed it was Kevin.
He probably came to ask me again for money, I wasn't home so
he asked Tonya and when she didn't want to give him the
money he went craze.
I was standing there the gun fell out of my hand it was
still smoking when it hit the ground, I couldn't believe it,
Tonya was...







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