יאיר פקר / Norma's Scent |
FADE IN: EXT. BACKYARD OF A THREE FLOORS HOUSE. DAY There are three metal chairs, A crooked metal table, a small shed at the corner of the backyard. Alan Kindrik (65) comes out of the back door. He carries a straw basket with damp clothes. A small bag hangs from his shoulder. He walks over to the clotheslines and puts down the basket. He then puts down the small bag and takes out clothes. He hums. He hangs the bag and opens it. He takes out several wooden clips. Mary Shindler (58) puts her head out of the window on the second floor. Mary looks at Alan. Alan takes out a shirt and hangs it on the clotheslines. He straightens the shirt. MARY Mr. Kindrik. Alan stops and looks left and right. MARY (CONT'D) Up here Mr. Kindrik. Second floor. Alan looks up. MARY (CONT'D) Mary Shindler. 2B. ALAN Yes I know. (beat) Did I wake you up? I'm sorry. I tried to be very quiet. MARY You didn't. I mean you didn't wake me up. Just looking out. Nice day. ALAN Sure. Alan hangs another shirt. MARY Your first time. ALAN What? MARY Norma always did that. Hanging the clothes early morning. Alan continues to hang the damp clothes. MARY (CONT'D) I said... ALAN Well Norma isn't here. MARY Did you wipe the clotheslines ? ALAN Why should I ? MARY Because they are covered with sand and dust after last week's storm. Alan does not answer. MARY (CONT'D) You want me to come down and show you? ALLAN No. MARY You should... ALAN I can handle it Mrs. Shindler. Really. MARY Ms. Shindler. (beat) These are Norma's clothes. ALAN Yeah. MARY I thought that your daughter in law... ALAN Glenda MARY That Glenda was supposed to take her clothes to the Salvation Army ALAN Who told you that? MARY She did. Glenda. After the funeral. ALAN She shouldn't have. MARY Well she did. ALAN I asked her not to. Not yet. (beat) I had to wash them one more time. Mary's head disappears. Alan notices. He takes off the shirts that he hung and puts them back in the basket. He takes a tissue out of his pocket and starts to wipe the clotheslines. He then continues to hang the clothes. Mary comes out of the back door. Alan sees her. He stops hanging. ALAN (CONT'D) I don't need your help Mrs. Shindler. MARY Need or Want ? ALAN Both. Go back. Please. MARY Why? I'm not in the way. ALAN I wish to be left alone. Do you mind ? (beat) It's private. MARY There is nothing private about a backyard. ALAN Privacy got nothing to do with the place. Mary sits on one of the chairs. Alan looks at her and then begins to take down the shirts. MARY Leave them on. Please ALAN Only if you leave. MARY Why? ALAN Told you. I want to be alone. MARY OK. Mary gets up and walks to the back door. She then stops and looks back. MARY (CONT'D) If you come across... ALAN I won't. MARY You won't what ? ALAN The blue shirt. I threw it away right after she went to the hospital. MARY You didn't. ALAN I did. Didn't like it a bit. MARY What was there not to like ? Just a simple everyday blue shirt with an white anchor stiched on the pocket. (beat) It was mine. ALAN Why would Norma wear one of your shirt Ms. Shindler ? MARY Because she wanted to be the first one to wear it. ALAN Well it's gone now. (beat) How much did you pay for it ? MARY It wasn't for sale Mr. Kindrik. (beat) I don't believe you threw it away. Maybe you will. Eventually. ALAN How much was it ? Fifty, Sixty dollars ? MARY Told you it's not for sale. Money got nothing to do with it. Mary goes into the house. Alan continues to hang the rest of the clothes. He finishes and takes out a bottle of coke and plastic cup. He sits by the table and pours Coke into the cup. Mary comes out with a paper in her hands. She walks over to Alan. She waves the paper. MARY (CONT'D) See? ALAN What is it ? MARY The receipt for the blue shirt. It's made out to me. Ms. Mary Shindler. (she reads) One long sleeved blue shirt with embroidery of an anchor on the pocket. ALAN Receipt proves nothing. For all I know you could have bought it as a present for Norma. MARY I didn't and she said she would give it back to me after she got out of the hospital and you had no right to throw it away. ALAN OK. I'll get you a new onen and I'll throw in an extra shirt. White. Mary walks between the clotheslines. ALAN (CONT'D) Well ? MARY Well what? ALAN Told you that the blue shirt wasn't here. Mary points up to her apartment. MARY I could see that from up there (beat) Norma always kept her shirts very clean and tidy. ALAN I washed all her clothes three times. This is why I didn't let Glenda give them away. Not yet. MARY I understand. ALAN No you don't. MARY You couldn't bear the thought that strangers will wear Norma's scent. Well I wasn't. A stranger I mean. Not to Norma. MARY (CONT'D) You had no rights to throw away the blue shirt. ALAN I had every right in the world. Norma was my wife. Mary drinks. ALAN (CONT'D) and I could do what I wanted with her clothes. MARY You know damn well what I mean. (beat) Why didn't you give it to Glenda ? ALAN Glenda ? Why her ? MARY Daughter in Law. Alan laughs. MARY (CONT'D) Did I say something funny? ALAN Give it to Brenda. (beat) She'll have to lose 20 pounds first. You got a sense of humor Ms. Shindler. MARY I don't. Not now. Mary drinks the coke and makes a face. MARY (CONT'D) You didn't bring ice by any chance ALAN No. Mary gets up and takes the cup with her. ALAN (CONT'D) Leave the cup. MARY I'm going to put some ice in it. ALAN I'll get the ice. Alan gets up. ALAN (CONT'D) You like Danilson's crackers Ms. Shindler? MARY The kind with the pepper and sesame seeds on top? ALAN Yeah. MARY Only the whole ones. ALAN I throw away the broken ones. Alan walks out. Mary looks around. She walks over to one of the shirts and smells it. Sh edoes so with several shirts and then goes back to her chair. MARY Shit. Alan comes back with a bowl full with ice and a large tin can. He places the bowl and the can on the table. Mary takes a few ice cubes. Alan opens the box and takes out a cracker. MARY (CONT'D) I think you are lying Alan. ALAN Am I ? About what ? MARY About my blue shirt. I bet you still have it. Alan laughs. He takes a few ice cubes. Mary takes a cracker. ALAN You'll lose. MARY How about 100 dollars ? ALAN I thought you didn't want to sell it. MARY I don't. I'll pay you one hundred dollars for the shirt. ALAN You will ? MARY Sure. I want it. Now. ALAN Why would you want to pay for your own shirt ? I would love to give it to you for a hundred dollars but I don't have it. I threw it away. MARY Somehow I got the feeling that you still have it. (beat) It is probably under your pillow and you take it out at night and bury that big nose of yours in it. You suck her scent into you. ALAN You're nuts. Let me tell you one thing Ms. Shindler. You bought the blue shirt knowing very well that Norma had only a few weeks. MARY She wanted to be the first to... ALAN Don't give me that. You were the one to talk her into wearing it first so that you could later get it back and preserve the shirt with Norma's scent. Mary gets up. ALAN (CONT'D) Only I was wise to you Mary. This is why I threw it away. Cell phone rings. Alan takes it out of the bag and opens it. MARY You are sick. ALAN (on the phone) Hi Brad... No. I'm not sick... I've got that woman Mary something from the second floor... I'm in the backyard hanging up Mom's clothes to dry and this woman thought she was my supervisor... Sure you can come and bring Rick. I want to find out what he wants for his birthday... OK. Bye. Mary walks to the rear door. Alan closes the phone. ALAN (CONT'D) Where are you going Mary ? MARY I could never figure out what Norma found in you. ALAN Your kind never does. Mary gets up. Sh eputs back the cup and walks to the house. ALAN (CONT'D) Didn't think you were a quitter. Mary stops and turns around. MARY The hell with you Mr. Kindrick, ALAN and with the blue shirt ? MARY I didn't say that. I know you have it. It is a simple as all that. You want to keep it to yourself and I won't let you. (beat) Norma told me how much you disliked the two of us going out together. ALAN Disliked ? What was there to dislike ? Two aging women going out... MARY Norma was only 52. ALAN And you are what? 60? 61 ? MARY 58. ALAN Sorry. I take back the aging. (beat) Two women meeting twice a month just to go to opera, concert, show or occasional lunch. MARY We were friends. Close. ALAN How close? MARY Good friends. Norma confided in me. ALAN Intimate? Mary is taken back. She is obviously shocked. MARY You dirty old man. ALAN That's not an answer. MARY Of course not. ALAN I wouldn't have minded you know. Mary goes to the clothesline and touches the shirts. MARY The sun is hot. The shirts will be dry in a few minutes. (beat) Poor shirts. ALAN What MARY These shirts have no identity now. Orphaned shirts. (beat) What about Norma's bicycle ? Will you sell it to me ? ALAN What bicycle? Mary points to the shed. MARY In there. ALAN It's yours. MARY No. It's not. Norma bought it six months ago and said that she was going to tell you that it was mine. I didn't mind. ALAN Why did she buy a bicycle when she had no idea how to ride it ? MARY Norma wanted to surprise you and your grandson Rick. (beat) I taught her to ride. Whenever she overheard you talking about one of your fishing trips she would come over to me " Alan is going fishing so it's time for practice ". We would put the bicycle in the trunk of my car and go to the park. Norma fell several times but finally mastered it. ALAN I asked her about the bruises on her legs but she said that she bumped against the table. MARY She planned to take the bicycle to your grandson Rick on his birthday September 10th and ride with him in the park. Her own personal present. Alan goes back to the chair and sits. He plays with the cup. Mary looks at him. MARY (CONT'D) Norma promised Rick that she'll learn to ride if he'll go riding with her on his 9th birthday. She told me that he laughed and said that she won't learn because only kids learn to ride the bike. (beat) She was sure you'll understand about that bike thing. She just loved surprises. ALAN Why you ? MARY What do you mean ? ALAN We were married for 10 years. Best of friends. We shared thoughts, wants, dreams, love and understanding. Yet she could not confide in me and preferred to share a surprise with a stranger. MARY I wasn't a stranger. Not to Norma. We were close. Very close. (laughs) Wasn't. Were. All in the past tense Alan. Over. No more. Finished. Never to return. Mary takes a cracker and eats it. MARY Now only her scent goes on living though not for long. ALAN I know. (beat) I better not mention Norma's promise to Rick. He probably forgot all about that. MARY Don't think so. Kids don't. Alan smiles. MARY (CONT'D) What? ALAN Had a crazy idea. Actually I managed to surprise myself. MARY Like what ? ALAN Like you riding the bike with Rick. MARY No. ALAN Why ? MARY I can't take Norma's place. Not with Rick not with anyone. (beat) He's your grandson. ALAN You'll never take her place with anyone Mary but somehow I have the feeling that Norma would've liked you to be part of the surprise. She'll share it through you. (beat) Part of the blue shirt too. Norma's scent is still there. Sometimes it smells like she just took it off. Strong, live, vivid. MARY It's all that we have left Alan. Alan gets up and touches the shirts on the clotheslines. He smells them. MARY (CONT'D) Well ? ALAN I'll ask Glenda to come and pick them up tomorrow. (beat) You think I should give them away folded or on hangers Mary ? MARY Norma would have given them away ironed and folded covered with a crepe paper. ALAN I know. MARY I'll help you take them off. ALAN I'm a lousy folder. Alan and Mary start to take off the shirts. END. |
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