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/ blues at night

In a big town of a huge country, in the darkness of the
streets when the smoke comes out from the
underground, a few night clubs was working and making
wonderful sounds of blues music, a man was going out from a
black street his shadow following him, a big and scary
shadow, the man was walking and passing by those night clubs
he look at one of them and turning his face to the ground,
the man looks very sad he is stopping next to a night club
called "the blue birds" he thinks for a while and deciding
to go in. in the club there is a band singing blues one
black and fat woman is sitting down and hearing her voice to
the crowd  , the man is sitting down next to the bar and the
bar tender is asking him for a drink the man is asking for a
brandy, a nice lady is sitting down near to our guy and
smoking a cigarette
She is giving our man this look that makes him nervous, he
is looking at her back and drink his bandy
Suddenly one guy is coming and sitting next to this lady,
she gives him a big kiss, it looks like he is her boyfriend
our guy sees that and get disappointed alil bit he thinks to
himself for a while and finish his drink in one piece, he is
paying to the bartender and go away in the moment he is
tuning around from his sit he he sees a beautiful young lady
sitting next to him, he stops and taking a good look at her
she doesn't look at him, suddenly one man who wants to take
our guy's sit asking him is he is going our guy doesn't
answer him he still  looking at this young lady  the man
asking him again and again and the young lady hear that and
look at our guy and give him a smile that conquered him
forever she goes away and he is following her then the man
can sit in our guy's chair , the young lady seducing . Our
guy who cant stop look at her and follow her steps right to
her room up stairs, when he realized that  
She wanna have him he got a lil bit scared, he approached to
her door and she closed the door right to his face, his was
quit surprised but also happy that nothing happened, he went
out from this club and walked, he passed near to a small
club and decided to go in, suddenly he heat in a sweet lil
girl who just passed infront of him. She fell down and
dropped al of her stuff down he asked for her name and he
said he was sorry, she lifted up her face to him and he saw
her face and it was that woman from this night club he just
had been. She looked at him, he saw her innocent eyes and
her face didn't look so sure like it was when he first so
her, he asked her why did she closed the door, and she said
that he looked to her a young good man and she didn't wanted
to hurt him, he said what do u mean by "hurt"
And she told him about her work how she use to seduce people
and steal from them money while they are naked, and how she
make them humiliated. Our man had a lil smile and asked her
for a drink. she didn't agreed  because she just on her way
home. she asked him to walk her home and ofcourse he was
glad to do that, they went in the black streets when the
blue neon's are working and she told him about some more
about her work how she dragged people to some rooms claiming
that it was her home
And how she used them to steal from them. that's how she
made money and lived all of her life. our guy asked for her
parents and she said that her mother did the same thing she
did and got killed in one of the cases that some Mafia man
was involved. Our man was quit surprised from her story he
was just listening to her and didn't say anything, they just
got to her home standing right to her door stares he told
her that it was quit a night, she smiled, she looked at him
he looked at her back, and she offered him to come in and he
said no for start but he was convinced very fast he went up
to her and they had a nice glass of whine, they sat down on
her couch and talked for a long time, they seems to like
each other and they even kissed that kiss conquered him he
was so up in the sky that he couldn't see even the birds
flying under the clouds, she seduced him and took him to her
bed room she took off his shirt ,
Very slowly and he opened her buttons on her shirt one by
one very very slowly. she made a small level of groaning
everyone could hear the sounds of those buttons getting
opened, he took her shirt off and hold her body and she sat
right on him, she could feel him and he could feel her back,
she started to take off his pans, when she scratching his
body very easily and slowly that he gets electricity in all
of his body, he was so amazed to see her naked sitting on
him and groaning so loud that he that thought to himself
about her job and suddenly when she finally cumin and he is
too, she gets up open her big mirror like a window and their
were like 20 men shouting and clapping for her and  giving
her lots of money  , the man was surprised he felt so
humiliated , he tool his clothes and got out from her house
He went down and started to walk to looking at those night
clubs in those streets of the underworld when smokes covered
them up more and more while he walking away from there, he
had down his face to the ground and fade away in the white
smoke ....







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בבמה מאז 9/3/03 3:52
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