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/ Coke World

Characters:
Melanie: young girl, short dark hair, blue eyes, dressed
casual - Converse.
Nick: Young guy, indifferent to his surrounding, content
with himself.

The film will be shot in two locations.
Location A: Wall: Melanie standing holding a small bottle of
coke (less then half full) there is nothing around, just
background of a brick wall.
Location B: Tube: Melanie and Nick, sitting on the tube,
both sitting very comfortably, comfortable with each other,
Melanie with bottle of coke, Nick with book.

The Script:

Location: Wall

Melanie standing by a brick wall holding a less than half
full small bottle of coke

Melanie:
''Well, I was sitting in the tube''

Switch to Melanie in tube (she is there alone)

Switch to Melanie near brick wall

Melanie:
''Nick was with me''

Switch back to tube, (wider frame)
Melanie sitting with Nick.
Nick reading ''1984''

Location: Wall
Melanie
''I was sooooooo bored''

Location: Tube
Melanie sitting next to Nick. Melanie staring at the bottle
of coke,.
Nick reading ''Animal facts''
Melanie begins rattling the bottle, Nick glances at Melanie,
and glances away.
Melanie starts rattling with more vigour
Nick turns to Melanie

Nick:
''Why are you ruining the coke? You're wasting it''

Melanie:
''I'm not wasting it''
Stares at bottle (examining)
''I'm having fun with it''

Cut to:
Melanie in the same position, Nick reading ''Harry Potter''
in different position.
Cut to:
Melanie still in the same position, Nick reading ''What is
Scientology?'' in different position.
Cut to:
Melanie in the same position, Nick reading ''Catcher in the
rye'' in a different position.

(all this time Melanie is playing with the bottle)

Location: Wall
Melanie
''After a while a thought occurred to me''

Location: Tube
Melanie looking up and left, towards a non-existent light
bulb
Nick beside her reading ''Little Women''.

Melanie:
''Followed by the immediate realisation the animated light
bulb doesn't actually appear out of thin air''.

Location: Wall

Melanie
''What if we are like a bottle of coke for god?
basically, he is just a guy playing with us''.

Location: Tube

Melanie is playing with the bottle, Nick beside her reading
''The Silimiliarion''.

Melanie V.O:
''Ok, a really really BORED guy playing with us''.

Melanie starts shaking the bottle hard

Melanie VO:
''So he decided to have a war!''

Melanie wars around, starts getting bored and shaking the
bottle less

Location: Wall

Melanie
''Well, wars get boring after a while. So he decides, to
like, have a NATURAL DISASTER!''

Location: Tube
Melanie staring at bottle then suddenly goes wild.
Nick holding ''A Foreign language book (learn Japanese in 10
days)''.

Melanie waves the coke gently from side to side, close up of
her face, eyes through the bottle.

Melanie VO:
''... he lets us settle down for a while''

Melanie pauses.

Melanie VO:
''... he turns us around...''

Melanie turns the bottle around

Location: Wall

Melanie:
''Then he lets us have free will''

Location: Tube
Melanie still paused. Nick reading ''The idiot book''.
Melanie begins to turn the bottle wildly like a roller
coaster going totally wild
Nick stares a what the fuck stare, and returns back to his
books.

Location: Wall
Melanie near the wall, takes a sip from the coke.

VO of Unfamiliar voice
''What happens next?''

Melanie:
''Nothing''

Melanie begins walking, frame widens, and Melanie puts the
cap back and throws bottle to a bin that appears in the
frame - as she walks out.



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