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He walked slowly none noticed but he didn't fit to the frame
of a playing
   ground he didn't have a child with him and he wasn't a
kind old man
   who feeds the birds. He climbed up to the tower veiwing
the playing ground
   Opened his breifcase.
   Inside the breifcase there was something weird that did
not belong there
   something that belongs anywhere but a children playing
ground.
   He assembled the gun quickly thats what he was trained
to do the sniper
   scope he acquired from the internet bought it at eBay
they say the scope
   was used in afghanistan, he bought it for his love for
war history he never
   imagined using it specially at a children playing
ground.
   He looked through the scope at the kids for hours he
watched their mother's
   taking care of them making sure they'll eat a snack
won't get hurt
   won't fight.
   He been there for hours then he noticed a couple they
were lovers they walked
   there to just talk he remembers a friend he used to do
this with he walked
   with her allways to a playground and they just talked
for a while.
   He didn't understood how
   How he has the job he wanted and worked for so hard
   How he is completely alone
   How what he does is so important and so critical yet
none appreciate it
   Its been years since he felt womrth towards him, every
smile he gives
   is a fake one
   His friends say can't he be happy with what you got ?
can't you just
   enjoy life things might change come with us to a party
it will be allright
   He declines them all the time yet they continue to ask
they never
   give up thats what he likes about them.
   He wonders how life got so hard for him that he just
can't bare it
   The clip rolls in quickly no issues there its all seems
so calmed from
   up there, there goes a bullet inside the chamber the
safety goes to
   single shot, the finger just slids on the triger.
   It seems like it took the bullets hours to arrive after
the boom
   at first people thought it was just a kid playing witha
fire cracker
   but then screams of a mother bleeding to death changed
the scene
   
   She runs towards her she always likes to help she
screamed at her child
   to dock and stay down. She suddenly feels a sting at her
arm as if
   something bite her it took her a minute to understand
she was shot down
   she didn't know why she didn't feel pain slowly she
closes her eyes
   while her child knows none of this he is docking and
fears from the booms
   that rocks the playing ground that was once the home
peace and what is
   inoccent kids.
   
   The parents the screaming children all in panic none
knows what to do
   the police arrives one squad.
   That bugs him he think to himself a children playing
ground he though more
   will come he thought an army will come but only 2 cops
arrive
   he turns the gun in automatic and fires towards him a
whole clip
   they bleed to death in a matter of seconds they couldn't
even report back.
   
   He already shot at 30 people 9 of them still breathe the
kids already understand
   whats come to happen they cry and scream for help the
big ones
   hold the little ones from running towards the injured
parents.
   
   Its getting cold he thinks to himself damn cold his
phone rings
   he takes out his hand gun and simple shot at the damn
phone.
   
   As he starts to think about what he has done he wants to
kill himself
   give himself to the police help the injured perhaps
   
   His life cross through his eyes he sees all he done and
all that was
   done to him a worm liquid he feels at his hand.
   It is indeed his blood he bleeds from his head what was
once
   considered to be his only thing the only thing he has
   A mind a great mind he had indeed all his work
   saved lifes and he did it just for the plain reason of
saving those
   lifes.
   
   It came to that, that due to his lack of abillity to
understand
   why he can't manage to find a decent girl and not mass
it up he killed
   30 people injured 9 and was shot to death by 60 years
old man that
   happened to be around feeding the birds and just picked
up a gun
   of a policemen he killed.
   
   No one really had an answer to what happened on that day
it was like a movie
   none knew of this.
   He kept to himself they say the friends from school said
he always acted kinda
   funny he always was kinda sad.







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בבמה מאז 25/7/06 9:56
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