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/ A Simple Twist Of Fate

Boom! The door slammed as Mike Jersey ran into the HSBC
branch in Hong Kong, gasping for air his forehead dripping
with sweat. He took out his Revolver which was in his left
side pocket and yelled "freeze! No one move! Hands in the
air!". A woman holding a baby caught his eye, the baby was
screaming and the woman tried to make him stop by shaking
her arms. Mike looked away and started to walk briskly
towards a cashier at the end of the hall. Looking around,
still no one moved. Finally he got to the cashier, a tall
man with blond hair and big brown eyes and a smile that
could melt you away. "Yes sir, how may I be of service?", he
asked in a soft voice. "Take me to the safe! Now!", said
Mike. "Right this way sir, follow me". Mike followed the
man, holding the gun to his back, "How are we doing?" asked
Mike and smiled with an evil grin. "Great, just a few more
steps and we are there". They entered a big room at the end
of the bank. The room was empty but the alarm system was on.
"Grant, do you know how to disarm it?". "Sure thing Man". He
punched in the six digit code and the room fell quiet. Mike
took the Revolver and put it back in his pocket. The room
had smelled of jasmine and the color of the walls was light
green. They approached the safe slowly. To their surprise
the safe was open. "That's weird" said Mike while turning to
Grant. "I left it open in case I forgot the code" said Grant
smiling his big and beautiful smile. Mike knew Grant from
the first grade, they were best friends. He knew well what
Grant's smile can do, make any girl fall to his feet,
literally. When both of them were in the tenth grade Grant
had every girl he wanted, even Mike's girlfriend Donna, the
most beautiful girl in school. She had long black hair and
big blue eyes. He ended up marrying her. Mike didn't forget
that but he forgave Grant and came to the wedding and gave
them his blessing. "OK put the money in the bag" said Mike.
"Sure thing" said Grant and started to fill the bags with
dollar bills, twenty's, fifty's, hundred's, all of them.
"WOW, there must be a cool mill here!" said Grant while
filling the bags. "We can have anything we want. What do you
want to buy?" asked Mike, "Maybe a house with a pool, a new
car or a diamond for the wife. How about you?", "I want to
open my own restaurant, "Mike's place". "Catchy" said Grant
as he was closing the last bag. "Well that's about it I
think, lets roll". They went out through the back door, just
as three police cars were pulling up to the front. "Somebody
must have tipped them off while we were getting the money"
said Grant as the wind brushed through his blond hair. The
police got a glimpse of them but before they could see where
they were going they ran off, "I know a place we can go to"
said Mike and started running towards his favorite place in
the world, the "happy place" as his psychiatrist called it.
Mike was a very troubled boy and his parents told him he had
to see a psychiatrist at least once a week. Mike hated that,
all they did was sit and talk about the "happy place".
Whenever he felt sad he always knew he could go there and no
one would disturb him. "Come on! Let's go!", yelled Mike as
he leaped into the ally. Finally they were there. "Stop! We
are here" said Mike and looked up. It was Victoria's Peak,
the place where you could see all of Hong Kong spread before
your eyes. They entered the cable car to the peak. A
security guard sat in the front seat. He spotted them and
paced towards them. "Hello gentleman, may I ask where you
are coming from?" he asked in a strong voice. "My house"
said Grant as he flashed a smile and started sweating. The
security guard had a smile on his face too. "OK, have a nice
day". "That was close, I thought he was on to us or
something". The cable car stopped at the top of the peak and
there it was the breathtaking view, the tall buildings, the
birds and the trees. Tourists were all over the place. "We
better hide the money somewhere, we don't want to walk and
be asked questions about what is in the bags" said Mike.
Grant took the bags and carefully placed them in the nearby
bushes. "Let's hope no one finds them" said Mike and started
walking to the edge of the peak. All his childhood memories
came rushing back. He remembered taking Donna here on her
birthday back when they were going out. He blindfolded her
and led her here, it was night and the view was amazing, the
whole city gleamed and sparkled. Then they ate some ice
cream and kissed under the starry sky. "OK what's our next
move?" asked Grant. Mike didn't answer, he was still
thinking about that magical night and how he wished it would
never end. "Hi! Mike! Are you listening?" asked Grant and
gave Mike a hard chap on the shoulder. Mike hesitated, and
after ten seconds gave Grant an angry look. "No time to
play, we need to go, now". They took the cable car down to
the city. When they arrived at the bottom Grant asked "what
about the money? Aren't we going to take it with us
somewhere?". "We will pick it up tomorrow" said Mike and got
off. It was getting dark and the sky was full of stars, more
then usual, as Mike recalled and reminisced that night with
Donna. "Let's go to sleep, its getting late" said Mike and
punched Grant softly on his arm. "OK, see you tomorrow, and
don't be late!", "I wont" said Grant and started walking
towards the subway station. He waved goodbye and vanished
down the escalators. The next morning was a gloomy morning,
the sky was pale and the sun hid behind dusky clouds, fog
was all around and the visibility was low. It was eight in
the morning but it looked like the middle of the night. Mike
and Grant decided to meet at their favorite restaurant, the
famous "Yakiniko Tanka", the best Chinese restaurant in Hong
Kong. Across the street from the restaurant there was
another HSBC branch, Mike and Grant knew exactly which HSBC
branches to rob, there were many branches in Hong Kong but
these were the largest. Mike had brought his trusty Revolver
and Grant a Magnum. "It's time" said Mike as he looked to
see if there were any security guards around. "We go in,
take the money and leave, no hostages, got it?" said Mike as
they started to pace slowly towards the big metal entrance.
They passed the metal detectors with no beeping and
continued toward the bank teller who was just getting behind
his desk. "Freeze! No one move! Hands in the air!" Yelled
Grant ant took out his Magnum. "I'm going to the safe" said
Mike and started running. Suddenly the alarm went off and
the sirens wailed. "Oh oh" said Mike as he heard the alarm.
The police were soon outside, "Step out with your hands in
the air and no harm will come to you!" one of the policeman
said through the loudspeaker. "What do we do now?" asked
Grant. "We don't give up! Now we take hostages!" said Mike
and pointed his Revolver at a man standing with his back to
him. "Grant!", the yell came from the other side of the
bank, it was Donna. Her face was red as she came closer to
them and tears were rushing down on her cheeks. "What are
you doing? Are you crazy? She cried,  " I was meaning to
tell you but-" said Grant "Why are you doing this?" she
interrupted him." We need the money" said Grant and smiled
at her. "Don't smile at me! Put the gun down now and we are
going to the police!". "No!" he yelled and aimed the gun at
her face. "Put the gun down Grant" she said and tried to
push the gun away. "What are you dong here anyway?" he
asked, "It's a free country Grant I can go wherever I want"
she replied. "Get out or we are coming in, you have one
minute, we will open fire" the policeman said again.
Whatever they thought of doing it had to be fast. "That's
not an answer Donna, what are you doing here?", "you really
want to know?". "Yes, yes I do!". Donna stuttered and then
finally said "the truth is I was going to leave you, take
out all of my savings and leave without telling you and just
run, I couldn't stand it anymore Grant, I felt smothered and
I just wanted out.". Grant didn't say a word, just stood
there and did nothing. "Ok Grant lets go, I have the money"
said Mike as he entered the hall, his eyes landed on the
beautiful girl standing next to Grant, her long silky black
hair on her shoulders and her big blue eyes looking sadder
then ever. "Donna?", his chin dropped. "Donna is that you",
"Mike thank god you are here" she ran to him and gave him a
big squeezing hug, "long time no see" they said together,
they both laughed. She noticed Mike's Revolver and said "I
can't believe this, you are in on it too?". Her eyes became
wide and her face looked confused, "what are you doing
here?" asked Mike. "Never mind that now both of you put down
your guns and go outside to the police!". "Donna I have
something to say". "Not know Mike we don't have time, the
police will come in any second!", "I have to say this",
"what Mike?", , "I still love you Donna, I didn't forget you
and I still love you" Donna's face went from sad to happy
and her eyes sparkled, she was speechless. "I love you too
Mike", all her memories of him came rushing back, all of the
wonderful memories, the walks on the beach, and Victoria's
Peak. "What?!" said Grant and his chin dropped. Grant didn't
forget how good a friend Mike was over the years and decided
to do the noble thing. "I love you Donna and I can't believe
you would do this to me but if you love Mike and he loves
you I don't want to be in the way, I'm going out and I will
turn myself in". Mike and Donna were stunned. Grant ran to
the entrance and walked through the door holding his Magnum
in his right hand close to his chest. "I give up" ,he
shouted. Just as he finished saying that a hail of bullets
was shot puncturing his heart and stomach. He fell silent on
the floor covered with blood. The policeman approached him
to see if he was alive. He was dead. Dead and cold, his blue
eyes were open and he had a calm look on his face. He did
the right thing. Inside the bank Mike and Donna ran to the
back door and slipped out without being noticed. "Where are
we going?". "You will see" said Mike and they both ran into
the street. They arrived at his favorite place, Victoria's
peak. "I remember this place" she said with a soft tone.
They took the cable car up. At the top she asked him "what
now? Where do we run?", "wait here a second" said Mike and
took off. Minuets later he returned with two big bags of
money. "What's this?" asked Donna and her chin dropped to
see the big bags of money in his hand. "This is one million
dollars, we can go wherever you want". "I want to stay here"
she said and took his hand. The walked on the peak and got
to the edge, both their memories rushed to them. It was
getting darker and few stars appeared. "Do you remember that
night?" He asked her. "Off course I do, it was one of the
happiest days in my life" she said and kissed on the cheek.
"Grant was a great friend, I will always remember him" said
Mike and kneeled. "Will you marry me Donna?" . "Yes I will
Mike", he gave her a broken smile and took her in his arms.
The buildings lit up and the lights of the boats in the bay
danced on the water. "It's beautiful" she said. Her blue
eyes looked happier the ever. A shooting star crossed the
purple sky. "Make a wish", "I wish this night will never
end". They stared into the hollow night. "Its fate that
broke us a part and its fate that brought us back together"
said Mike. "What do you think will happen now?" asked Donna.
"I think fate still has a few trick up it's sleeve".







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