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מדורי במה







אייל חמיידס
/ The Conflict

What can you lose in a soldierles battle ? , more
importantly what can you gain? In an imaginary battle-field
of an UN-known location, goes on the most important conflict
to the living soul, the battle of Good and Evil.

For an UN-predictable reason with the growth of progress and
technology, came a yearn for power, and so Evil grew, It
grew until it was to powerful to exist in the mental world,
and so Man's greatest and most dreadful creation was born,
Evil had a form. Before its foot touched the earth a shadow
passed over the world. The sun seemed so weak. And hope, so
far away. As it seemed Hell and had risen from the corners
of mortals minds and onto there existence. This creature was
far greater then our worst fears, for he was created of
them. And at this point in time, neither religion nor sex or
even colour had any meaning any more. In some ironic twist
of fate in mans darkest hour. Did we accomplish, even if it
was for a single second, World peace.

In no record till this day can anyone describe what Evil
looked like. Nothingness, Darkness.... The end itself... In
a final attempt for a resurrection, man found all hope that
remained in his soul an gave Good a form. But with the tear
of the mental and physical realms, did two unexpected
figures rise, Anger and fear. Both these were as enormous as
Evil itself for these feelings filled the heart of man.
The three Bright figures stood together, alone, and yet with
the entire human race with them and awaited the coming of
the tides of darkness. Good with its glow attacked the evil
darkness and for a single second hope filled mans heart. But
as soon as the shadow touched both Fear and Anger, they
became as dark and Evil as the shadow itself. For both these
emotions are slaves to our own dark side. Good had fallen to
the trap evil set out for him, But good did not turn Evil,
he chose to die, And with that did mans desperation
rekindle. At this point death was nothing more then a
statistic. But with each fallen soul, so did a little part
of the Evil die. For at the final moment of one's existence,
there is nothing but peace... pure and true.

And not but one soul remained alive. A young child, barley 6
hours old.... She was hungry, alone but no Evil was in her
soul. Evil himself came for her. It engulfed her soul bit by
bit, but as it did so, he felt Itself weaken, With that Evil
fell to the ground shaking. Only then did Evil truly
understand it's existence, He is not the source of Evil in
us, but we are in his.
And god himself looked upon this girl, and all of mans
salvation was found in this girls soul. And with this little
girls final breath did heaven and earth collide, and bright
lights burned from the crippled bodies lying dead on the
ground. Streams of energy burst from every corner of the
earth and Evil Cried, not for pain or defeat. But of the
final understanding, that he was are slave. Thus all the
souls that were taken broke free of the dark bond of the
evil shadow and returned to there Bodies. The whole world
seemed to have awoken from a dream. Very distant, but real.

And the only thing remaining UN-touched was the lifeless
body of this infant. But her soul lives, with every breath
another human shall take she shall take it with him, her
existence is a part of every-thing, And in her mind, in an
UN-known time in an imaginary place. Starts the struggle of
good and Evil.

                                                           
                       - E.C.







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היצירה לעיל הנה בדיונית וכל קשר בינה ובין
המציאות הנו מקרי בהחלט. אין צוות האתר ו/או
הנהלת האתר אחראים לנזק, אבדן, אי נוחות, עגמת
נפש וכיו''ב תוצאות, ישירות או עקיפות, שייגרמו
לך או לכל צד שלישי בשל מסרים שיפורסמו
ביצירות, שהנם באחריות היוצר בלבד.
"כל פעם שאני
רוצה ללחוץ על
'ערוך את
הדפיוצר' אני
לוחץ בטעות על
'הציעו סלוגנים
משלכם' ומשם,
הדרך לכאן ממש
קצרה"


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בבמה מאז 13/6/01 10:37
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אין הנהלת האתר אחראית לכל נזק העלול להגרם כתוצאה מחשיפה לתכנים אלו.
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