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מדורי במה








Once upon a time there was a kingdom by the sea. And there
was a garden full with roses and tulips in this kingdom by
the sea. In day light, everything was so beautiful, and so
perfect in this kingdom, but with nightfall, if you'd listen
carefully you could hear a girl's cry. When the local people
went to sleep, and there was no more children laugh, and no
more singing birds, you could hear her cries louder and
louder.
There was a brave young man in this kingdom by the sea. He
listened to her voice very carefully every night. He learned
her voice, he could picture her, and he knew where she came
from- the garden. He felt he is falling in love with her.
The maiden always was sad; her eyes were red because of the
tears she cried, her body was weak, and her soul was
desperate. The flowers in the garden were not beautiful as
before, and the smell was not so good. Her loneliness took
over her, refusing to let go. She wanted to leave, but she
couldn't. He wouldn't let her to.
The kingdom by the sea had a king. He was a very powerful
king, he was mean. He was more then hundred years old, but
it wasn't shown of his face. He walked around with his
sword, scaring his people. He was the one that locked the
maiden out. He was the source of her misery.
One day the boy set by the sea, the sun pounding on his
head. He tried to find his maiden's voice in all the voices
on the sea.
He decided to go after her.





He walked through the garden gates. The whispered- cry
turned into a scream inside his head. He walked faster and
faster, follows after the sound of pain.
And there she was. His maiden. His love. She set on her
knees, so peaceful, but with it- so filled with sorrow and
grief. She screamed at the sky, and then she saw him.
She stood up quickly; her dress got wet by her tears. She
looked at him, not believing that someone is finally here,
she was saved. She ran towards him, letting her hands touch
his arms, understanding- he's real.

"Why are you here?" he asked her.  
"He loved me, the king. But I wouldn't marry him, you should
have seen it, he.." she stopped.
"What? What have he done to you?"
"He is un-natural; he can turn something so dark and evil...
He doesn't live here. His castle holds nothing but a door.
He opens it and there's fire, and he walking into the fire,
and he goes out of the fire harmless. He never ages, not
changing.. he locked me here to punish me. I loved him, but
I lost him."
He looked at her in compassion. Then he held her. "I promise
I will save you. I promise."

He took the battle she'd given him. "Take this potion, and
put it in his wine. He'll drink it by tonight, like he does
every night. He will fall asleep for thousand years, and I
will be free. Just be careful, I don't want to lose you
too."

He went away. He walked through the garden gates, leaving
his love behind.
A great castle stood before him, dark and cold. A grey thick
fog cast its shadow on the frightening fortress. He walked
trough the steal doors, which opened as he came to it, like
a magic. Bare walls, dunk air, weird smell of fire.
The castle hadn't held any rooms, just a big foggy space,
with one door only. He walked to this door very bravely,
with no doubt. Opened it. The strong fire left a burn on his
hand. The bright flame dazzled him. He couldn't go in there,
he is only natural.

After 3 hours the door was opened. He stood up quickly,
holding the battle towards the king. "My king, I".. From
no-where appeared 2 guardians, holding balls of fire in
their hands, threatening to take his life. "Guardians", said
the king, "Kill him."
They where just about to follow his command, when the boy
asked them for mercy.
"PLEASE, don't kill me." He fell down on his knees, "I was
sent to you by the king of a very far land, in the desert. I
was told to bring you this." He held out the battle, "it's
the most secret potion; it will triple your powers. You'll
be the greatest king the world has ever known."
"Stop, don't hurt him." Said the king. "Give me the battle.
NOW!"  
The boy stud up and gave him the battle. He drank it. "Go
away, before I'll decide I want your life over!" He turned
to the guardians, "I won't need you any more."
He shot a fire ball. They faded out in the flames.
"By tonight you will be the most powerful demon, you'll rule
the land, the air and the water. So long, sir." The boy had
left the castle, not allowing the king to say any thing.
He ran to the garden, to the maiden.
"You are free, my love, it's over."

In this night, when the kingdom by the sea fell asleep, the
air was standing still.
Peaceful darkness was resting on the kingdom, no more girl's
cry while the wind blowing at the trees. Silence, at lest.







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בבמה מאז 10/5/02 9:16
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