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מדורי במה







ג'וני וודסטוק
/ oldman-part two

they were all friends from the first day and they did all
together,including this party,food and music by the best
artists-beatles,dave clark five and more,she danced all
around while the rest went to the pool-in the middle of the
yard,and went for a swim,green light shows up in the
water,oldmann goes down and disapears.

next day he was founf,they walked him home and forgot all
about it..
john and mark rested at home,just set there and shook their
heads,they got really scared and never spoke of this again.

a new year is at the doorstep and the winter-festival  was
starting,shows and games,great food and so much more-all
thanks to mr and miss melvin.

and there was the freak-show  and everybody loved it,all
but the freaks who just wanted to be left alone,but today it
ended sooner then other times before,all the freaks was seen
before and the owner-mark's father ,was broke..the only one
that knew that was john.

oldmann did not speak of what happend,not a word,that day he
felt strange,looking at himself in the mirror,he felt hair
and ears,getting longer,but when he checked it out nothing
was changed-

it happend for a week or more,until that night..when he was
invited to a party at his friends house,he came and the free
beer got to his head,more then ever.

now?

yeah,don't forget the wings,tie him hard.

i know..or they'll be weak-sais mal and tied him harder to
the tree,then joined mark in the house.

he woke up the next morning,pieces of rope all around
him,then got up to his feet and walked towards the way
out,what was he doing outside his friends house-all the
people turn their heads when oldmann walked by.

in his house all was crazy,they all looked very deeply at
his wings,phones all day long,people got restless..he gave
the phone a mad look and it exploded..

john waited outside for oldmann-

what?

nothing..you're coming?

where to?

mal and mark..by the way how you feeling?

fine..just fine,why?

no reason-said and smiled happily,yet very scary..oldmann
was a bit shook up..in the middle of the way oldmann's site
went cloudy.

you're okay?

yeah-said while feeling heat waves

sure?

su..re-said and felt it all over again,he sat on the
ground,john left to call for help-

mal saw oldmann-

what are you doing here?

what's wrong with me?

i'd love talking to you..but me and mark have company.

who?

some..you wanna meet them?

but you just..

i'm a bit confused,come on in.

they came in and everyone looked at him,he sat on the floor
and talked with them for a while,then he saw a big mobile
cage,made of iron,deep inside lay a girl just like him.

long hair,ears long and wings-which by now grew more then
the last time he looked in the mirror.

he came inside to check how is she doing,she was an
hologram-the door closes on him..

somebody help me out

we can't

what..?

you know my freak show?

you can not do this!!

i can and i am,right now you're under my control!!

leave me alone

sorry,it is you or me,i never liked you anyway

okay,hate me but leave me be

no!! said and covered the cage with black curtain,oldmann
felt tired,until the next morning..

he was chained to a white bar in some cold yard,his wings
were broken and his ears hurt,that noise..he knew that
noise,the markers sound-

after the marking johnn's father and mark's father play some
game of cards,oldmann got some rest,most of his power was in
his wings so he was in a bad shape,some were his fans and
spoke of letting him go,but all refused and kept attacking
him.

after three years he got used to the cage and tried to have
fun any way he can,making mistakes just to get a smile,some
magic tricks-the magic power was unknown to him,until one
day,waiting for his shot,he told to himself..i wish they
will miss
 and it happend,mark and his dad went to the next
room to see what to do.

he had shows for five hours,training for three hours and
four hours for last directions,one hour cleaning the office
of the boss,and only fifteen minutes to eat and rest.

oldmann had a plan but mark heard all and it got cancel,all
kept an eye on him,only late at night he could think of a
plan,and he had a new idea,but it also got cancel thanks to
his friends.

his wings were all burned out,he had to go through hops of
flame,his ears was hurt from the audience calls,he asked for
help but all thought he's only acting,some just ignored
him-

he asked for lennon's help,then from rafael,if he only knew
that was only rafael's painting
-

lennon,rafael..please help me..rafael,you know what i
feel,said but no answer,only maria talked to him,helping him
out.

a new plan started-oldmann did his part and then in the
great ending made one mistake after another,the boss got mad
and ignored the crowd,he told oldmann to get a grip,really
mean and load,the crowd starts to leave..

the boss on his knees calls back for the crowd and tells
oldmann to take his time,this went on for sometime when
everybody else does as oldmann,the boss loses his cool and
shouts once again,the crowd calls him names..

from all of this mess oldmann free all of the freaks  and
fly outside the tent,the boss who keeps his reputation good
ignores it all to keep his good-heart  look on his face.

oldmann and all of his new friends live now in the highest
mountains,but not for long,soon place will be bought,guess
by who..
















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בבמה מאז 5/5/02 17:25
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